Nine Writing Errors that Cause Convoluted writing

This is copied from a post in the /r/writing subreddit over at Reddit. All credit to the author /u/publishwide. I was inspired by u/CancerDuck868‘s post here, and I thought I’d add something that I’ve learned over the years vis-a-vis avoiding overwriting. NB: This list isn’t the end-all, be-all of overwriting errors. But these are among …

PR: Fatal Throne

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The Ramshead Algorithm And Other Stories, by Kj Kabza

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